You struck a really nice chord with this one. I love the intimacy that laces everything together here, and that it isn't really sexual at all, despite what they've just done. That morning after, the way they say 'hi' to each other, that's perfectly pitched, and I love the conversation they have and the conclusion that Rachel comes to, even if she can't really explain it to Joey. 'This is ours' really speaks volumes. I can really see why she would need this from Joey and how it so clearly isn't a mistake, even if nothing further can really happen between them at this point. It's a tough line to walk and you did it beautifully.
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Date: 2011-10-30 06:50 pm (UTC)