the turtle moves
2011-10-30 06:50 pm (UTC)
You struck a really nice chord with this one. I love the intimacy that laces everything together here, and that it isn't really sexual at all, despite what they've just done. That morning after, the way they say 'hi' to each other, that's perfectly pitched, and I love the conversation they have and the conclusion that Rachel comes to, even if she can't really explain it to Joey. 'This is ours' really speaks volumes. I can really see why she would need this from Joey and how it so clearly isn't a mistake, even if nothing further can really happen between them at this point. It's a tough line to walk and you did it beautifully.
Thread from start
This account has disabled anonymous posting.
You can comment on this post while signed in with an account from many other sites, once you have confirmed your email address.
Sign in using OpenID
If you don't have an account you can
create one now
HTML doesn't work in the subject.
Check spelling during preview
This account is set to log the IP addresses of everyone who comments.
Links will be displayed as unclickable URLs to help prevent spam.
Top of page